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#1 AMORELITUANO

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Parašė 06 spalio 2007 - 01:19

cari amici.... al ritorno dalla lituania ero costretto a restare 8 ore a francoforte e verso le 4 di mattina, dopo 5 ore di attesa mi sono permesso e dilettato a scrivere una piccola poesia(se cosi vogliamo chiamarla - presunzione a parte) natuiralmente in lituano.
per favore potete correggerla ?
ho usato una grammatica molto semplice visto le mie ancora elementari conoscenze.
aciu



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Parašė 07 spalio 2007 - 14:43

Rodyti pranešimąAMORELITUANO, Oct 6 2007, 02:19, pasakė:

cari amici.... al ritorno dalla lituania ero costretto a restare 8 ore a francoforte e verso le 4 di mattina, dopo 5 ore di attesa mi sono permesso e dilettato a scrivere una piccola poesia(se cosi vogliamo chiamarla - presunzione a parte) natuiralmente in lituano.
per favore potete correggerla ?
ho usato una grammatica molto semplice visto le mie ancora elementari conoscenze.
aciu
DRAUGAS NERIS...
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AS TURIU VIKTORIJA :D :( :woohoo: :(


Anch'io ho scritto una poesia....si chiama...

"Speranza":

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#3 giorgio

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Parašė 07 spalio 2007 - 14:47

Rodyti pranešimąlyuka, Oct 7 2007, 13:43, pasakė:

Anch'io ho scritto una poesia....si chiama...

"Speranza":

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he he dovevi darmela ieri che me la giocavo!!!!!!!!!!


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Parašė 16 spalio 2007 - 02:38

Rodyti pranešimągiorgio, Oct 7 2007, 11:47, pasakė:

he he dovevi darmela ieri che me la giocavo!!!!!!!!!!



peccato avresti fatto solo 12 :)


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Parašė 16 spalio 2007 - 17:59

dai ragazzi perchè scherzare su ciò? scrivere una poesia in una lingua straniera non è affatto semplice....Ammiro amorelituano per la sua creatività...ma....c'è qualcuno di voi che potrebbe tradurre la poesia in italiano per quelli ignoranti in materia come me???? grazie ate


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Parašė 16 spalio 2007 - 18:40

Rodyti pranešimąm_a_t_t_e_o, Oct 16 2007, 15:59, pasakė:

dai ragazzi perchè scherzare su ciò? scrivere una poesia in una lingua straniera non è affatto semplice....Ammiro amorelituano per la sua creatività...ma....c'è qualcuno di voi che potrebbe tradurre la poesia in italiano per quelli ignoranti in materia come me???? grazie ate

e' intraducibile.... :) e' talmente profonda...che difficile "pescare" il significato.... :blush: :woohoo: ate....


#7 Original Is Always Best

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Parašė 16 spalio 2007 - 20:53

DRAUGE NERIS...
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Parašė 16 spalio 2007 - 22:17

ma quanto e' brava ' sta ragazza :blush: ora che hai fatto la traduzione dal lituano al lituano :) devi tradurrla in italiano x Matteo... :woohoo:


#9 Original Is Always Best

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Parašė 17 spalio 2007 - 09:22

Ho coretto io, non era una traduzione :D Ma ora la faccio in inglese :D :) un po con le mie interpretazioni :blush: So, ladies and gentelmen! :woohoo: WHO DID THE KISSES SEND, TO VILNIUS AND TO MY LOVE? IT WAS NERIS MY DEAR FRIEND, WHOSE KISSES WERE LIKE DOVES :whistle: // SOON EVERYTHING PASSED, BUT THE RIVER STILL FLEW. IT BROUGHT THE TIME THROUGH STREETS WITHOUT A CLUE. // SO BRING ME, OH LIFE, BRING ME VICTORIA PLEASE! AND I WONT BE AFFRAID WHEN STRONG ARE YOUR STREAMS! // COZ I VE GOT MY LOVE, COZ I VE GOT MY VICTORIA. Am i not a new Shakespeare? ;) :o


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Parašė 17 spalio 2007 - 09:59

yeah... :) so you must ask yourself : to write, or not to write :blush:


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Parašė 17 spalio 2007 - 10:11

Rodyti pranešimąChristine, Oct 17 2007, 09:59, pasakė:

yeah... :) so you must ask yourself : to write, or not to write :blush:

I think I won't :woohoo:


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Parašė 17 spalio 2007 - 10:20

Rodyti pranešimąOriginal Is Always Best, Oct 17 2007, 11:11, pasakė:

I think I won't :)

Now it really sounds better, and I won't tease anymore about that....maybe :blush:


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Parašė 17 spalio 2007 - 15:17

Rodyti pranešimąOriginal Is Always Best, Oct 17 2007, 00:22, pasakė:

Ho coretto io, non era una traduzione :D Ma ora la faccio in inglese ;) :blush: un po con le mie interpretazioni :woohoo: So, ladies and gentelmen! :whistle: WHO DID THE KISSES SEND, TO VILNIUS AND TO MY LOVE? IT WAS NERIS MY DEAR FRIEND, WHOSE KISSES WERE LIKE DOVES :D // SOON EVERYTHING PASSED, BUT THE RIVER STILL FLEW. IT BROUGHT THE TIME THROUGH STREETS WITHOUT A CLUE. // SO BRING ME, OH LIFE, BRING ME VICTORIA PLEASE! AND I WONT BE AFFRAID WHEN STRONG ARE YOUR STREAMS! // COZ I VE GOT MY LOVE, COZ I VE GOT MY VICTORIA. Am i not a new Shakespeare? :o :huh:


Congratulazioni Shakespeare ma bravo anche la novello Basanavicius... :)


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Parašė 17 spalio 2007 - 20:43

oh!!!! so deep! thanks so much for your translation!!!! it sounds really cool;)


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Parašė 17 spalio 2007 - 21:56

Rodyti pranešimąm_a_t_t_e_o, Oct 17 2007, 20:43, pasakė:

oh!!!! so deep! thanks so much for your translation!!!! it sounds really cool;)

Thank you :) Well i changed some words and frases with others of same or similar sense for making a rime :blush: :woohoo: So it sounds better :whistle: btw there were no doves in the original poem :D


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Parašė 18 spalio 2007 - 18:09

Rodyti pranešimąOriginal Is Always Best, Oct 17 2007, 22:56, pasakė:

Thank you :lol: Well i changed some words and frases with others of same or similar sense for making a rime ;) ;) So it sounds better :whistle: btw there were no doves in the original poem :woohoo:

Oh I see... but I'm sure that even the original version sounds good!


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Parašė 23 spalio 2007 - 23:14

Rodyti pranešimąOriginal Is Always Best, Oct 16 2007, 20:53, pasakė:

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Ta - dah :D Eccomi :rolleyes:

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